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Friday, February 7, 2014

The protagonists internal feelings

Philips internal feelings are that he's stuck in  raft with this old man that he finds stubborn.He is parted a way from his mom and he really misses his family.He feel a deep loss when no ships are coming towards them and he feels alone. Lucky he has Timothy but soon Timothy dies and he feels a deep deep loss.He finds his way along and finna a ship comes.

4 comments:

  1. Change your title to the question, but otherwise good job.

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  2. Alex, your title is not the correct one... change it! Your post was well explained, good job!

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  3. Alex your post was good and rich but I couldn't really indentify the question at once because the title was wrongly writen.

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  4. You need a space before starting a paragraph. I agree with you about his feelings.

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